Being in the UK commuting on an EV is cheaper.
Daily work and back for the past 8 months has been 50 miles daily. KTM 690 Enduro R in sumo outfit with low speed high torque grin factor would cost £1161.27 annually just in fuel. Another £614 in Tyres/Pads/Oil/Filter/Chain/Sprockets/Valve Shims/Wheel bearings/Brake Piston seals thats just parts as I do the work myself. Another £273 for insurance. £86 TAX. £60 breakdown cover. All up £2193.27!!! I know the CBR125R owned and clocked 31,000 miles in two years, if your gunning it everywhere check your clutch plates and the radiator likes to corrode after aroung 28,000 miles (use ACF50 frequently), the hose from the pump cracked too. Good bike tbh if you leave it stock.
Now get yourself some A123 20ah, vector frame, adaptto and a cromotor/QS and you have yourself a massive torque E Grin with 40+ speeds. 11p per 1kW fast charge at home and free charging at work

. The first year will look bad, a heavy hit in one go as opposed to sneakily trickling out like ICE, however it still works out cheaper.
The 2nd year well now your talking, batteries/frame/controller/farkles etc... now paid for!!
So i.e. 63.3Wh/mile @ 40 mph with UK rate of 11p per kW = 15.7 miles
thats 0.007p per mile
32,000 miles =
£224
How far can your CBR get on £224?
Also, the figures you give are for a battery build, why didn't you include how much the ICE costs?
FYI a few things to consider an ebike or building your own e-moto:
-My commute time only increased by just over 10 minutes, because its your average speed that counts, even with doing 'occasional' highs of 90mph on the KTM!
-Your not in the petrol station every couple of days and I rarely have to carry money/card/wallet! Home-charge/Work-charge no money exchanging

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-The torque these DIY bikes can kick out is great, no real waiting for the 'power band' to kick in. 125cc 'cough'.
-Any 125 rider will remember drafting being vans or trucks to maintain that 60-70MPH, works with EV too! Bit loony and I know the preachers out there wont like it, but I find it fun 'hunting' vans and lorries and getting to 50-60MPH and using only 8-12 Amps.
-Its damn satisfying building your own ebike, if something is rubbish or breaks it's your own fault and you learn and fix it

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-Damn reliable, only running issue so far is 1 flat tyre before I switched to moto 24". Oh and a A123 20ah cell puffed (2nd hand welded tab...).
-Running costs are minimal to none. Occasional tyre, maybe pads if regen isn't used too much, possibly fork oil.
-The bigger AH the pack the more battery friendly, running lower C ratings at both charge and discharge which will, depending on your DOD and ROC, make your pack last a very long time! 2 charges daily 365 days a year worst case and very hardcore would at 3000 cycles last just over 4 years!!
Topic should be changed to:
Are batteries cheaper than an ICE
or
Is Petrol cheaper than electricity