No reason why it wouldn't work. Each BMS takes care of its own battery, thus when one of the batteries reaches the low voltage threshold, it will cut itself, and thus cut the circuit. There is always some dispersion in manufactured parts, so there's always the risk one battery can be say 1% better than the second, thus the "weaker" will discharge first, ever so slightly faster than the other. Since they're in series, one battery exiting will open the whole circuit, unless you wire the only live battery left and cut out the empty one.